How Not to Suck at Your Job

??Ken Walker??: “Getting the Basics Right”:http://relevantmagazine.com/life_article.php?id=7104. Hey, that’s me. :)

“Alissa”:http://www.alissaclark.com needed an article for the Career and Finance department of ??Relevant Magazine??, so I thought I’d divulge all the secrets of my success in 1,000 of my favorite words. Speaking of not sucking, do you know _how_ to condense everything you’ve ever wanted to say about the corporate world into a two page blurb? Revise, revise, revise. Then ask for feedback from people you respect (and will be honest about how much it _still_ sucks), and revise some more.

The final article endured 61 mostly-late-night revisions, ballooning up to as many as 1,714 words at version number 34. The picture below is every change I made between that version and the final. Highlighted green words are additions, grey struck-out words are removals. Here’s to “embracing your constraints”:http://www.37signals.com/svn/archives2/the_positive_side_effect_of_big_text_less_text.php:

Getting the Basics Right, versions 34 and 59 compared

11 Comments

  1. Posted February 2, 2006 at 12:01 am | Permalink

    Wow Dude! Way to get published! That’s awesome, and a good article to boot. I mean, I know you’ve been blogging for a while, but getting published on someone else’s magazine is a bit different. Congrats.

  2. Posted February 2, 2006 at 9:07 am | Permalink

    Thanks, Chris. :)

  3. Posted February 2, 2006 at 1:19 pm | Permalink

    Ken, that’s extremely cool. Ditto to what Christ said. Congrats.

  4. Posted February 3, 2006 at 10:17 pm | Permalink

    Ummmm… I meant what CHRIS said, not what Christ said. :)

  5. Posted February 6, 2006 at 9:48 am | Permalink

    lol–thanks, Matt. Hey, when is the TechBridges blog going live? :)

  6. Posted February 6, 2006 at 11:25 am | Permalink

    Way to go Ken! I so enjoy reading your blog. It’s ever so much more well-written than mine; perhaps that fact should serve as inspiration for improvement . . . :)

  7. Posted February 6, 2006 at 11:30 am | Permalink

    Oh, and your bio on the Relevant site is perfect. :-D

  8. Posted February 6, 2006 at 5:22 pm | Permalink

    Thanks, Kyleen. By the way, where’s your blog? I googled your name but only found an a cappella group at NYU. :)

  9. Posted February 7, 2006 at 1:57 pm | Permalink

    Ah, the good ol’ days as one of the N’Harmonics . . . you can find me here: http://www.xanga.com/a2cutefrog

  10. Posted February 7, 2006 at 2:49 pm | Permalink

    Awesome. “Subscribed”:http://www.xanga.com/rss.aspx?user=a2cutefrog.

  11. russ
    Posted February 15, 2006 at 9:46 am | Permalink

    Congratu-freakin’-lations, man.

    Canny list, entertaining (and dare I say applicable) even for the non-cubicle set. Very well-written with the right word for every thought.

    I have so many in-law stories to tell! Thanks for giving me one I can be proud of.